She Writes

Welcome, welcome!! I know you will enjoy YWS. I have been a member for about a year or so, and I LOVE it. Any questions, PM me! Courtney

MAYA! Hey, girlie. I'm a bit unsure of this. I think it is a good idea, but I know it could use some editing. ------CRIT--------- Be independent! don't sit there, ...

About my dance studio. --------- The music that is booming Carries me away To somewhere where I’m Inside the composition, Moving to the beat. Loud and booming, You hear it ...

I wrote this for school. Our topic was to journal about somewhere we wanted to be at that moment. I chose my Aunt Cris' house. It's a bit long, but ...

6/10 Dont know what it is, sorry.

Welcome to YWS !! I'm sure you'll love it here. =] Listen to niteowl. That girl's got some good tips that will definetley help you out ... She's someone you ...

8/10 Corvettes!! =]

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Hmm. Maybe you could add on to this? And try poem format? (See "Striving For Sometime" crit.) Love ya, Maya! xx Courtneyyy *teeth thing*

Hey Maya! Maybe you could try using poem format? Like: Maybe, If you keep pulling the strings You might find something. Or maybe not. If you keep pulling the strings ...

Out of those? NaNo. But for writing tips, I really, really love Fiction Factor . Till, I'm not so sure how to navigate through Fiction Factor ... it seems like ...

Oh, yes. Definetly! It sounds great. Stay sweet, Courtney -- x

4/10 its alright

Yes she was. 10/10

thanks guys. =) alice, 8.2/10 (Lol) That guys cuuute.